The play ground

In this story I worked on using interesting sentences with joiners and correct capitals and full stops.

Under the bridge damp air blows on my face and the wooden bridge sounds like a creaky door.The monkey bars drip with rain and are ice cold.The slide is wet and the tunnel is dripping.The bell rings and year 1,2,3 race into the play ground.Stones start crunching and kids start chatting and having fun!If you see some one go down the very wet slide you would probably think 'well he/she must have a wet bottom!'I can smell fresh air and rain starting to come down.